ORCHIDS
Up the hills
down the dale
I saw them dancing to the tune of the breeze
red,yellow,white and pink
so many colors to wink
This beauty blooms once in a year but twice in my dreams,
it plays i-spy with the sun but is a paradise on the moon
If you are a true nature lover , you will also hover
why these nymphs don't grow throughout the year fulfilling my only dream .
(This was composed by me in eighth standard )
hey its awsme yar....i liked it.......!!!
ReplyDeleteheyy ankita! i didnt knew that u such a marvellous poet!..great job! all the best for ur furthur creations!
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way 2 go girl..! u shed pearls frm ur words..!
ReplyDeleteVery well written. Keep it up. Hope you have many more in store.
ReplyDeleteWow yaar!!!...""badhiya likha"".....
ReplyDeleteLet riti's beautiful world of imagination keep flowing through her PHENOMENAL poems....
Keep the spirit up....
hi riti pyari,
ReplyDeleteyour kavita is nyari,
i am sure there are plenty in your jholi,
just like your non stop boli.
heroine...
ReplyDeleteUr creation..
ek likha hai kitna ghasitegi aur...naya likh..
joking re..
Gr8 one and sweet jus like u..
My Sweetu..
Love u..!!
Oh did i just say I love U...
I didn't mean it..
hehe..Awesome one re..
hey ankita its just amzing,
ReplyDeleteand a real master piece and u r genious
u have gr8 talent really
mind blowing just rock on yaar
Thanks!!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful :)
ReplyDeletemarvellous,keep it up
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